Showing posts with label story line. Show all posts
Showing posts with label story line. Show all posts

Saturday, 8 February 2020

08.02.20 - FEST - Mrs Williams

WARM UP

For our warm up, we played Zip Zap Boing to get our brains working and our bodies moving.  We started very early and a lot of us were very tired so this helped.

NEW STORY LINE

James then introduced a new story line which is closer to our original stimulus, the play Art.  He has replaced the plain white canvas with Meredith.  It starts with three friends from university, like Art, and one of the friends doesn't like Meredith and the other is more of a people pleaser but also wants to keep everyone together.

IMPROVISATION

Louis, Tristan and James tried to improvise a fragmented monologue.  It started off strong and effective but I think it started to go downhill as there was no proper aim for what they wanted to.

FRAGMENTED MONOLOGUES

Louis, Tristan and James went to write their fragmented monologue.  They started with writing their own monologues and then finding places where they link so they could fragment it.  It worked so much more after they did this.  They included some choral speaking which was really effective and I also liked the touch of dialogue when James described something that happened in the past and Louis acted it out.

NEW STORY LINE

There were still some aspects of the story line that we thought needed improving so Amelie, Seth, Silvana and I worked on completing it.

London
  • 3 friends - Harry, Fred and David - friends from university
  • Harry meets Meredith and they fall in love
  • David gets mad and thinks that Meredith has taken Harry away from the friend group
  • David and Harry almost get in a fight but Fred calms them down
  • David then meets Jane
  • Everyone is a happy family again
  • Harry proposes to Meredith
  • She then suggests moving to Hawaii and Harry thinks it's a great idea
  • David and Jane act like they're happy
  • Behind Harry and Meredith's backs, they plan to split them up
Brighton
  • Meredith's brother, Jeff, his roommate, Charles and Charles' girlfriend Marie
  • Charles suggests that they all move in together when they go to London
  • They all agree
  • Jeff goes house hunting 
  • Jeff finds a place but they can't move in for a couple weeks / a month
  • Jeff calls his sister Meredith and asks if the three of them could live with her and Harry
  • Meredith says yes
London
  • Marie gets angry because Jeff and Charles are messy
  • Jeff overhears Jane and David plotting to split up Meredith and Harry
  • Their plan is to tell Harry that Meredith is cheating on him with Fred
  • Jeff tells Meredith that they're plotting something and she doesn't believe him
  • Jeff tells Charles and Marie
  • Marie then tells Jane that she shouldn't do it and she agrees 
  • Jane goes to David and says they shouldn't carry on 
  • David says they should break up if she doesn't want to carry on
  • They break up
  • David tells Harry anyway
  • Harry believes Jane and David and Meredith gets annoyed that his friends aren't nice so they break up
  • Jeff talks to Fred and tells Fred to talk to Harry whilst Jeff talks to Meredith
  • Meredith tells Jeff that Harry thinks that she cheated on him with Fred
  • Jeff runs to stop the fight between Harry and Fred
  • Jeff says that Fred couldn't have gotten with Meredith because he is gay 
  • Fred says he isn't gay and Jeff is confused
  • Harry and Meredith understand the misunderstanding
  • They get back together
  • Jane and Marie are best friends
  • All is good

Wednesday, 5 February 2020

05.02.20 - FEST - Mrs Williams

WARM UP

We did a massive warm up with the another year group.  We started off by doing the game samurai which is about concentration.  The class splits into two groups and there is a leader for each group.  The leader then does a movement which the other team has to reply with another movement that correlates.  If the leader punches, the other team must cross their arms.  If the leader kicks, the other team must jump.  If the leader claps, the other team has to spin.  If the leader moves their arm either way, the other team must move in the direction of his arm.  If the leader puts his hand up, the other team must squat.  We then did another warm up which was to move around the space until the teacher said something and then we did what they said.  When the teacher said to clear the space, we had to run to the closest wall.  If they said opposite, we would have to sprint to the other wall.  If they said shell, we had to curl into a ball on the floor.  If they said sprawl, we had to have 3 points of contact on the floor.  If they said neutral, we had to stand in a neutral position and if they said favourite we had to point to a specific point in the room.  Then the teacher played Bohemian Rhapsody and we had to sing throughout the activities.  It warmed us all up and motivated us.

PLOT POINTS

Louis gave us some more plot points which were very useful and gave us a great place to start from when creating the other story lines.  He created a story for Silvana, Seth, Hugo and my characters.  Some of the points he thought of were that Hugo and I are in a relationship but Hugo spends all of our rent money on clothes etc. and then we get evicted so he tries to get us to live with his brother but my character and his brother don't get along at all so I say that I don't want to live with him.  I then go and live with my sister and then when we're more stable I want to get another apartment with Hugo but he's more interested in the rich life with his brother.  We then break up and then I realise how great life is being single and then Hugo wants me back.  We then both realise that we're better off without each other.

IMPROVISATION

We tried to do an improvisation of the bar scene like our Party Quirks exercise in the improvisation unit.  This was to show us going in a bar and meeting some of the people.  We each had objectives for our characters.  My objective was to somehow portray that I had slept with the barman who was Silvana's ex.  I found it quite difficult to show it without straight up saying it.  We then decided to dissect this scene into two different ones as there were too many conversations going on at once.  One of the scenes was focused on my character and her sister Silvana and the bartender.  Silvana and I already knew our objective but James didn't so we tried to show him through the scene.  I started off quite slow but then figured out ways to portray it in a comedic way.  The second scene was Tristan, Louis and Amelie.  Tristan's objective was to get in between Louis and Amelie.  Yet again it was quite slow to begin with but then they came up with some great ideas.  We then improvised some more scenes related to Louis' ideas about Jane and David.  We improvised the scene between Jane and David (played by Louis today because Hugo wasn't here) about when he tells her that they're getting evicted.  After a couple of tries with different ideas, this turned out quite well.  We then did the scene between Jane and Marie which went well so we decided it would be best to script it, and then the final discussion between David and Jeffery.  We thought that it would be best to keep these scenes quite short as there is no need to waste time just to get an easy message across.

SCRIPT

Jane and Marie discussion

*Jane and Marie sitting down*
Jane - Ugh! David!
Marie - What's he done this time?
Jane - Blown all our money.
Marie - *Gasps* On what?
Jane - Clothes and shoes.
Marie - He's so stupid.
Jane - But guess what's even better?
Marie - What?
Jane - He couldn't pay our rent and now we're evicted.
Marie - I told you he was bad news.  Why do you never listen to me?  Didn't I tell you?  Huh?  I'm always right and you never listen.
*Silence*
Marie - So where are you planning on living then?
Jane - Yours?

WARM UP

For our afternoon warm up, we did something quite similar to this morning with the teacher giving us instructions but this time, when "favourite" was called, we had to point at James and he had to face the audience in neutral.  Then pointing just went to looking at him.  We did this with a few other people as well to see which looked most powerful.  I think that it looked most powerful with James.  We also did a game where we all held hands and one person stood in the middle of this circle and then one person on the outside had to try touch the person on the inside but the people holding hands had to try protect that person.

FREEZE FRAMES

We then did some freeze frames.  The first one was of the bar scene which everyone was involved in.  The other freeze frames didn't involve everyone so the other people just pointed at the scene.  Then we made another set of freeze frames for the second plot line in which the first freeze frame was the same.  We then tried to come up with a third plot line / freeze frames for the barman.


RUN THROUGH

We then did a run through which was difficult for my character as Hugo wasn't here so I did the movements at the start by myself.  The rest of it went well and it was helpful to see where we were at.

IMPROVISATION

We did some improvisation for the scenes involving Frederick, Charles, Meredith and Harry.  The rest of us did some script writing and compiled it all in one word document.

Wednesday, 29 January 2020

29.01.20 - FEST - Mrs Williams

POINT PLOT / STORY LINE
  • Physical Theatre Prologue (feat. Monologue from James)
  • Exploring relationships with characters
  • Overhears customers
  • Louis and Amelie on stage together - they already live together and are planning the wedding
  • Harry loves Meredith
  • Meredith is a control freak and gets a kick out of controlling
  • Charles wants to split Harry and Meredith because he's in love with her
  • Charles tells Harry a lie that Meredith has been seen with the bar man
  • Fight between Harry and Frederick 
Little things that pick at Harry
  • Harry smells Meredith's perfume on Frederick 
  • Phone gets left behind and receives message from Frederick
  • Harry finds a piece of clothing that isn't his
  • Left phone behind when she's gone to yoga, yoga teacher texts asking when she will get there
  • Getting a message from a nickname / unisex name
  • Leaving phone behind - message from Frederick saying 'you left your bag here' when she was at the bar with Harry
  • Meredith goes to bar and bar tender pours drink and says something a bit flirty or personal which Harry doesn't like
  • Charles introduced Meredith to Harry and Harry was supposed to be the wingman to Charles but just stole Meredith
  • Harry at bar, notification on Frederick's phone of 'M' - Harry thinks it's Meredith but it's Marie
5 Points
  • Wedding planning
  • The lies
  • The fight
  • Harry being left alone
  • They separate and find their loyalties lie within themselves
More Detail
  • All characters introduced
  • All relationships introduced
  • All relationships shown through the wedding planner (guest list, best man etc.)
  • Dinner party announcement of engagement
  • Charles tells Harry about little rumour
  • Series of lies in physical theatre
  • Spying on Meredith
  • Gradually gets more and more convinced
  • Conflict
  • Wedding cancelled
  • Harry being left alone
WHAT WE WILL DO NOW

Do point 5 last because it's a result of everything else that happens.
Makes more sense to start with point 1
Split into groups
Louis, Tristan and Amelie (James scribes)
Emma, Silvana, Hugo and Seth come up with scenarios about the conspiracies to do with Meredith cheating

CONSPIRACIES

  • I saw her at the bar with Frederick
  • Frederick was giving her free drinks
  • They looked all over each other
  • He took her to his room
  • Instead of going to yoga class, she goes to meet her lover
  • She can't keep her legs closed
  • Frederick keeps winking at her from across the room
  • She actually eats meat
  • She's slept with everyone in this town

Tuesday, 3 December 2019

Dealing with Clair


PLOT/THEMES
  • Clair, a real estate agent, is helping the couple, Mike and Liz, sell their house.  They ask Clair to accept the first offer.  A perfectly good offer is made, however, then a potential buyer, James, enters the scene and offers a higher bid.  All ethical notions go out of the window and Clair is stuck in the middle of the couple's double dealings and receives too much male attention from both the buyer and seller.
STRUCTURE
  • Non-linear - The story wasn't in chronological order from what I saw.  It was quite hard to tell as there appeared to be 2 story-lines, however some points seemed to be as if these 2 story-lines were happening at the same time, like when the Italian girl and the investigator wire up the house to hear all conversations going on in the house.  At the end there was a jump in time from when Clair appears to be dying on the floor to when Mike and Liz get another estate agent to help them sell the house.
  • 2 narrative story-lines - What occurs within Mike and Liz's house and the investigator.
  • Dramatic irony (audience knows outcome but characters don't) - There are a few lines during Clair's phone call that signify something will happen and then this is anchored by the unwanted male attention from the buyer and seller of the house.  There is also a very poignant part when Liz says to her husband that he would "rape" Clair.  Even though the husband isn't the one to kidnap her or rape her or whatever happens at the end, it still foreshadows events.
SIGNIFICANT MOMENTS
  • Clair's phone call - seems to be studied by investigator and foreshadows events later on - also sets mood and tone for play as eerie and ominous.
  • The Italian girl's Italy call - find out she's involved in the investigation.
  • Mike and James giving Clair too much attention - foreshadows events later on in play.
  • James and Clair playing snap - clearly unprofessional and they both know it - finally seems like a tipping point which it is.
  • James on the phone - see Clair on the floor barely moving - find out what happened to her.
ACTING / MOVEMENT
  • The set was a model village with a room behind it and a walkway on top of the room.
  • The actors would use the model village space as if it was a room in a house and interact with the model houses as if they were seats, rooms and props.
  • The first scene, containing Clair's phone call had interesting movement as it portrayed a passing of time.
  • The proxemics of the character revealed a lot without having to explicitly say - for example, James and Mike would get very close to Clair indicating their interest in her.
TECHNICAL DESIGN
  • As I said before, they had a model village which they used as if it was furniture and seats etc in a house.  
  • The stairs to the bridge were used as part of the house and underneath that was the investigators room.
  • There were also model trains behind the wall upstage to signify Clair's house by the railway. 
  • Most of the time there was quite a plain white lighting, however, right before the very end, all the lights went off and there were people in masks with torches on stage and walking around in the audience to make it more interactive. 
  • Liz's shoes were set in a parking lot of the model village as if they were parked there but she changed her footwear when getting changed for James to come over.  Clair wore 3 outfits, a towel, blazer and skirt and blazer with trousers.  The investigator wore a plumber's outfit as a disguise to get into the house.

17.05.2021 - Auditions for Actors - Mrs Williams

 BETTE FINAL PERFORMANCE